This is a rough copy of the short movie there is no music or foley unfortunately. But all the cutting and the editing is done. But I have to put the title up as well as all the opening credits!
I liked the black and white, it sets the tone and atmosphere well for the type of film it is. There's a good use of camera shots and angles. To improve, I'd suggest trying to make some of the shots link up smoother. To do this you may ad dissolves (like you already have in some cases) or it could even be a sound-bridge, as there is no sound (as mentioned).
I think that this looks good and with some small edits and sound, it could be great.
I liked the black and white, it sets the tone and atmosphere well for the type of film it is. There's a good use of camera shots and angles.
ReplyDeleteTo improve, I'd suggest trying to make some of the shots link up smoother. To do this you may ad dissolves (like you already have in some cases) or it could even be a sound-bridge, as there is no sound (as mentioned).
I think that this looks good and with some small edits and sound, it could be great.