I loved your use of explanation boxes to set the scenes up, really set the time of the piece. I could tell your editing was well thought out and you used good camera angles. Once the music is added then the piece will look really good. To improve maybe add a couple more editing techniques just to separate some scenes, to add time.
This looked good. The text boxes are a really good idea.
To improve, I would suggest you make the text boxes bigger, as well as your ident. With ther fading into text boxes, im not sure whether it would look better if, instead of fading, they just cut to them. I'd recommend experimenting with it to see what happens.
i Really liked it and the black and white effect really adds to the feel of your movie and I liked the text boxes they worked well. All id say is it may have looked better with more people in the hall to set the scene more and make it look realistic. Once the music/audio is added in it will be wonderful:)
Really good! I like the over-the-shoulder shot of the mirror, and the use of black and white colouring. Some of the shots are a little shaky, I think the use of a dolly may have come in useful! However, you have set the scene well!
This is a very nice little silent movie opening. Youve done a good job and the use of the over sholder shots are good. However I think if you make the text bigger in the boxes that will be good. Punch a goose
I loved your use of explanation boxes to set the scenes up, really set the time of the piece. I could tell your editing was well thought out and you used good camera angles. Once the music is added then the piece will look really good. To improve maybe add a couple more editing techniques just to separate some scenes, to add time.
ReplyDeleteThis looked good. The text boxes are a really good idea.
ReplyDeleteTo improve, I would suggest you make the text boxes bigger, as well as your ident. With ther fading into text boxes, im not sure whether it would look better if, instead of fading, they just cut to them. I'd recommend experimenting with it to see what happens.
i Really liked it and the black and white effect really adds to the feel of your movie and I liked the text boxes they worked well. All id say is it may have looked better with more people in the hall to set the scene more and make it look realistic. Once the music/audio is added in it will be wonderful:)
ReplyDeleteReally good! I like the over-the-shoulder shot of the mirror, and the use of black and white colouring. Some of the shots are a little shaky, I think the use of a dolly may have come in useful! However, you have set the scene well!
ReplyDeleteThis is a very nice little silent movie opening. Youve done a good job and the use of the over sholder shots are good. However I think if you make the text bigger in the boxes that will be good.
ReplyDeletePunch a goose