My Foley Video-draft!!!

We were split into groups to produce a video for our Foley Project our one was based around the song by the Boo Radleys unfortunately I was unable to download the song so this is only a draft video when I can I will upload the proper version!
The Foley that we used was a door handle squeaking when the actress is opening the door and when she walks through the door we have a hand tapping on the orange skin.
If I was to improve this in any way I would probably have had the music playing when there is no speech and when the speech is about to come up I would turn the music down.